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  2. Posted

    Some idea regarding Sage art:
    While yes, I can imagine it being good; I'd say make there some sort of passive, hidden "proficency" counter on character creation that either puts that at advantage... or not. I mean, Jiraiya had little to no affinity for it and was unable to master it.

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  3. Posted · Edited by Thanathros
    Some more "adeptation".

    Basic Overview

    "The Nameless" Shinjo

    Bleach// Ukitake Jushiro | Shinigami, Ilustraciones, Fotos

    ,,You handle your own when you become a man.
              and become a man when you handle your own."
                        A wandering boy, devoid of his own truth, once upon a time.

     

    ♦ Overview

    • First Name: Shinjo
    • Moniker: "The Nameless"
    • Last Name: Long forgotten.
                              It used to be Jokari.
                              // Metaknowledge that can not be used in roleplay.
    • Gender: Male
    • Age:  35
    • Date of Birth: // Optional.
    • Height: ca. 6,299 lb // 1,92m
    • Weight: ca. 196 lb    // 89kg
    • Hair Color: White
    • Eye color(s): Green
    • Bloodtype: // Optional.

    • Occupation:

    Traits & Personality


    ♦ The Character

     

    • Alignment: True Neutral
    • Defining Character Traits:
      • To be filled.

     

    ♦ Skills & Talents

    • To be filled.

    ♦ Psychology & Behavior

    To be filled.

    Notables Features


    ♦ Facial Features

    To be filled.

     

    ♦ Physical

    To be filled.

    ♦ Accessories

    To be filled.

    ♦ Style and Clothing

    To be filled.

    History


    ♦ Family

     

    • Spouses:
      • Father:
      • Mother:
      • Siblings:
        • To be filled.

     

    ♦ Background

    To be filled.

    Misc.

    ♦ Additional Notes:

    Reference: Image found on Pinterest
    Please note: More to follow. I have a rough layout that eventually will follow along

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  7. Posted

    24 minutes ago, Gogo said:

    They do take this seriously and do investigations. However, it could take a very long time. I have even seen an year for some.

    I am fairly positive that those are special cases, though. 1 Year of investigation sounds to me like very, very unique circumstances.

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  11. Posted

    Just now, BloodyDoll said:

    You're not the only one rest assured. Not sure if my messages are coming through at the moment either. Refreshing discord at least allowed me to open the channel back up.

    Most likely not. 

     

    image.thumb.png.a56f6f5f08d182877b0bbf352f508643.png

     

    Seems like someone messed with the TLS/SSL ? 

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  13. Posted

    Germany here; We do not have quarantine established. However, school was cancelled for the next two weeks pretty much all over the country. As far as I can estimate, we will be moving into this quarantine-like phase within one-two weeks. 

     

    Personally, I consider all of this absolutely over the board. But that is my personal opinion and I am both aware and understanding of the circumstances "why".

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  15. Posted

    Feels a lot cleaner to me. Good work. I definitely like how it feels browsing. The worst one could say is - the fading from the background picture feels incredibly "hard". It could be a softer fade imo. But that's high level criticism imo.

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  17. Posted

    On 3/3/2020 at 10:09 PM, Vlad said:

    Please upload audio of your laugh as signature. 

    Thank you. 

     

    On 3/4/2020 at 12:47 AM, IAmAscathor said:

    It shall be done at some point. Trust that you'll most likely hear a lot more of my laughter if we go onto Voice Chat more often.

     

    4 hours ago, Batrachomy said:

    +1, I absolutely agree-

    It shall most likely happen when we get to Alpha.

    ? 

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  18. Posted

    1 minute ago, RINNEsasuke said:

    Theres no pros to it

    Same reason some (we) play non-clan. It's not necessarily "always" about benefits, but about the idea. There are not just pros to a clan; there are cons as well. For example, clans have certain traits and personalities that are mandatory. To quote the Uchiha Lore Guide:

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    An unofficial caste system was put into place shortly after their fabled Dōjutsu had begun to spread throughout the clan. 

    To be honest, I consider that boring. Personally. I am literally forced to consider that my character MUST have certain background- and character-attributes and I do not find that highly interesting to play.

     

    Everyone their own. Considering yourself a clan - and potentially having others join you and allowing you to shape it on your own - can be way more fun.

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  21. Posted

    1 hour ago, UzumakiAlexRO said:

    Better?

     

    Yes, it is. Consider my critic adressed! ?

    56 minutes ago, Dan said:

    I'd just like to say Alex, it's great that you're taking constructive criticism on the chin. Good attitude to have. ?

    I second that! Always good to see someone taking criticism and working with it. I certainly appreciate that!

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  24. Posted · Edited by IAmAscathor

    @Tempest We had that topic in discord yesterday. BBCode works with this one - it merely interprets the bbcode accordingly. 

    The WYSIWYG Editor happens to copy styling as well (rich text): which, in this case, kills the intended formating. If you want this to work try copying the code into a text editor (please avoid Editor, it kills newlines), then copy it again.

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  25. Posted · Edited by IAmAscathor
    Put "my additions" into bold

    14 minutes ago, UzumakiAlexRO said:

    Soo I did not wanna spoil my masters story but I'mma say this, he is a man who once had a family, his wife died giving birth to their child, and the child got stolen by a bunch of riders, so when I appeared in front of him he saw the image of his son in my appearance, that is what made him take and train me....

    Allow me to help you how you could phrase it in your story.

    This is how you wrote it:

    The strange man smiled bright and asked the little boy if he wants to join him. The face of the young boy brightened, and a big smile popped on his face, he finally found someone who can help him, someone that he can trust.

    I propose this as how you could've "implied" it:

    The strange man smiled bright and asked the little boy if he wants to join him. Why, he wouldn't say. But the face of the young boy brightened, and a big smile popped on his face. He finally found someone who can help him, someone that he can trust. Someone who made him feel safe after all this time.

    You wouldn't have had to mention too much and at the same time it gives some context. It helps the reader understand "why". You don't put explicit reasons. You just say there are reasons to it. Reasons untold. It gives some life to the story. Both to understand the man and the boy. ^^

     

    Writing is an art. It can be both easy and hard at times to properly portrait your idea into a few sentences. The more complex it gets, the harder to describe. Yet, you got a few rhetorical devices you can use to maximize your efforts and intends. It's mostly a matter of experience, so don't worry if you feel like you couldn't do this. You can. In due time. ?

     

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