tweego 7 Posted March 9, 2020 As much as I want to like this biography, it's hard for me simply due to the way you're trying to foreshadow a strong and cautious persona; but it simply ends up as unoriginal. My advice would be to try to create a more original scenario in which your character's arc start. The graphics are pretty neat though, it's a bit clustered together, but still somewhat neat. Spoiler 6/10, could use some work. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
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